Authored by thebiz

[thebiz]

An entree into Sparky's Storyteller contest. A writer writes...and so on....and so forth.

http://www.tmunderground.com/watch/f815354e3e29e977a88a/Authored

A touch of sound sync but after 3 attempts, I realize just how little of a perfectionist I am. Let me know your thoughts. I got a thick skin and am curious what people really think. Thanks.

[Dulci]

I like this. I've been fighting with that elusive devil called inspiration lately and found much to relate to. I always enjoy your work and really admire your clever writing. Nice work (no surprise there!)!

[Stoke Studios]

A matryoshka doll plot that's very well-written. It's a bit of a departure for you biz, but still containing the same, clever dialogue. I liked it.